Wolf

9/10 I love the butterfly, but it seems almost too glittery in contrast with the hand and background. Still cool though :)

10/10 Totally awesome! I love the way how it started as a mallet thing and changed into all sorts of other things. :D

:D Welcome to YWS! Yeppers, it's the best literary site there is. You can't find any better :)

*sighs* I can't give you a decent review since Azila and BBB have already pointed all the things out that I noticed... But just let me say that that was ...

My comments are in bold. :) Oh, and I started this review a while ago, so if I repeated things that have already been said... i have edited this according ...

Nova flung the covers off and shot across the room grabbing her notebook. This is great! Now we actually have a chance of surviving in this forsaken… I think there ...

:D Thanks! Lol, I'm obsessed with wolves too. They're the coolest! 8)

Oh, ok. But I think you should make that idea more evident in the poem. :wink: No, Ayra is good...still haven't decided whether Kesha would be better...

I get that feeling too--where I feel like I have to write--but the outcome [for me] is never nearly as good. This was a very interesting poem. I really liked ...

The morning sun warms the dark As the happy song of a calling lark Fills the air with music The trees sway gently in the daylight and rest there until ...

I'd love to publish a series, but I won't want that to be all I do for a living. I'd be, like, a hobo. Maybe I'll write freelance for a ...

I really liked that poem--very emotional, and I thought the way you put it together was very whimsical. As usual with your poetry/lyrics, I can't think of anything you should ...

Wow! That was really, really good. I loved how if flowed and I dunno, it just sounded really good :D I'm not very good at reviewing poetry, and well, there's ...

That is just too cool! I mean, a real journal? Wow! Hhhmm...I'm not sure if my writing is good enough to go into that. But maybe I'll work really hard ...

I also agree. ^^ People rarely start writing and think, "Hey, I'll use controversy!" It kind of...comes to them. I guess :P