Wolf

Thank you everyone for your feedback! I really appreciate it. :)

Yay, someone filled it out! :) My turn ... Name: Skye Gender: Female Age: 14 Race/Ethnicity: Caucasian with dutch and russian families Height: 5'7 Weight: Fluctuates, but never higher than ...

Sorry I'm a bit late! Anna Trueman sat awkwardly beside me outside Room 239, quietly sobbing. I think the 'quietly sobbing' part sounds quite awkward. In my opinion, it would ...

Sorry I haven't been on much! I had a cold all week & spent most of my time sleeping. But now it's back to business! Next up: Ilovebubbles123's piece, followed ...

Flux - gorgeous, & I don't mean the horse! ;) ^ My camera phone isn't the greatest, sorry for bad quality

Finished psudiname's piece. :) Next: • HIGHWHITESOCKS' piece • pointe2drama's piece

Here to review, sorry I'm a bit late! Like everything else in his life, his normal snack of rich cheeses and exotic juices was becoming bland and mundane. I'm not ...

Azila - just finished it. Took priority because it's for a contest. Next up: psudiname's piece!

Wolf here to review! :) These are some of my memories from a certain winter many, many years ago. There's nothing strictly wrong with this sentence, but I feel like ...

Up next: topic73681.html [by psudiname] viewtopic.php?t=73907 [by HIGHWHITESOCKS] I'll for sure do these tomorrow as soon as I wake up. :)

My name is Clara Stevenson. Normally I hate this kind of opening sentence, but I think it works in this context. I lost consciousness pulling myself to the lake, only ...

The family was new to the foster system, it was easy to see. Hmm ... as an opening sentence this catches my attention, but it feels kind of awkward. I ...

Reviewed! :) That's only one done so far today - I need at least one more!

As usual, nit picks first ;) Dove Redmond opened the door and held it, as he usually did for his classmates when he reached the room first. I really like ...

9.5/10 Makes me think :) And the bracelet is lovely!