WintryOz

I know it won't do me any good to explain my poem, but the "green dot" is supposed to denote a little green sprout. I'm pretty sure I've thought up ...

Hmm... I think I get what you've said. I'll be rewriting the story soon, so I'll try making things more descriptive and graphic. Khaki is a colour. I'm pretty sure ...

Thank you so much for the edit

I'm pretty sure I checked the spellings and removed all my mistakes, so I am rather puzzled by the statement. Well, I have said in the story that the box ...

Thank you so much for all those pointers. I will work on them when I edit (I shall do so very soon)

Thank you :) I'm so glad you liked it ^^

That would help, I guess, but there are still those things I pointed out. Also, it helps to have a hook right at the begining so that the reader won't ...

I shall add the periods (I forgot to do so, my mistake.) Thanks for reviewing :)

Thanks for the review. :) I'll try thinking of a better title.

You're welcome :) Yes, I figured that out :P