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  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: The Light

    Hello! :D This is a great little poem.The descriptions are beautifully written. (They are very vivid, and it's easy to relate to the speaker.) The only mistake (or at least ...

    Apr 24, 2024
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: The Bear’s Rock

    Hello! ^^ Before I write anything, I need to clarify something. I don't have much experience with reviewing other people's works. Nonetheless, I hope you find this little comment of ...

    Apr 1, 2024


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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