WinterBloom

I actually used to be that way so it remind me of the past so you did a good job giving the reader and idea of the person. It felt ...

This has a lot of meaning to me because im kind of going though something like this. It has a way of making people get pulled in and relate and ...

Oh my gosh this story is beautiful! It made me want more haha. But anyway I think you should have them talk a little bit more before you have her ...

Okay over all it was very good but there were a few things that bothered me. For one it is that you need shorter paragraphs. Second is when you said ...