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Re: The pain of a young child
It was 6AM when she woke her sister, they had been planning to watch their favorite tv show this morning, they were 5 and 9. They were so happy because ...
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Re: Travelling through life
I actually used to be that way so it remind me of the past so you did a good job giving the reader and idea of the person. It felt ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Newbie :)
Hi I'm new here I'm figuring things out and I'm hoping this will help improve my writing :) This website is really cool and I'm enjoying it a lot! Love ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Newbie :)
Hi I'm new here I'm figuring things out and I'm hoping this will help improve my writing :)
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Goodbye, Mum
This is deep! And if I can make a guess I would think this story has great meaning to you? I felt conected and you did a good job. A ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: How close we used to be.
This has a lot of meaning to me because im kind of going though something like this. It has a way of making people get pulled in and relate and ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Nature art!!
Cute!! :) Picture 1- That's amazing! I love the rain drops on the flower and the angle is great! Picture 2- probably one of my favorites it's so bright and ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Frozen and Flowing Time
Beautiful! I can't find a single flaw! it looks as if the water is frozen whichvis just a great picture! This isnt going to be very long cause I love ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Winter Love chapter 2
This is the second chapter of my story. Please tell me ifits bad :) "Ma I'm sorry I'm late, I'll go put the horses in the stable right now" "oh ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Girl in the Garden
Wow! Let me just say your little sister is beautiful and quite a good model! Now for the pictures Picture 1~ it is such a beautiful picture her posture is ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Pictures
So beautiful! So liked each and everyone of them but I think my favorite must have to be the first one. So on the first one I loved how it ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: The Winter Love
Chapter 1 I just started this story, please tell me what you think and if I should post the rest! Thanks :) Taylor's hair flowed as she ran through the ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Silver Lake
Oh my gosh this story is beautiful! It made me want more haha. But anyway I think you should have them talk a little bit more before you have her ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Sounds Perfect
Okay over all it was very good but there were a few things that bothered me. For one it is that you need shorter paragraphs. Second is when you said ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: My love story
A preview of the story I'm writin. I am kinda leaving you hanging but this is what I have so far. Please tell me what you think and if you ...
Nov 15, 2011