Winstonbeaudelaire

Thanks very much! And yes it should be capitalised. That bothered me when I noticed it. Yeah he's on a holiday in Asia

Thankyou! I will change Stella Artois in my final version...when I myself find out what happens. Thanks so much for the review

Thanks! I will have another look at it with those changes in mind, and yeah I think I could expand his own trauma and motivations, that's really helpful and thanks ...