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Re: Smoke and Dust 1 - the beginning
For twelve years this memory lay dormant in the pit of my recollection. Neither I, nor my keeper ever mentioned it again, knowing the penalty that was to pay. I ...
Feb 12, 2005 -
Re: Teenage life rules ( as if )
I was inactive in the conversation. I let Brian take over the minute he came, leaving me free to glance around. When I looked back at Sally I noticed she ...
Feb 12, 2005 -
Re: Smoke and dust (prologue)
This is kinda like a prologue. I'm sorta working on something to follow it up but I haven't had time write lately. Thanks guys :D
Feb 12, 2005 -
Re: Smoke and dust (prologue)
At first I didn’t know whether it was dust or smoke. A thick haze of vapor hung over the city, masking the setting sun. I stepped forward as though in ...
Feb 6, 2005 -
Re: Edge of Reason
Therma led me through the foyer and into the living room. "Your parents have already eaten," she told me over her shoulder, walking briskly toward the drawing room. "They're not ...
Feb 6, 2005 -
Re: slaughtered wisdom (teeth)
“I’m so hungry,” I rasped. My voice was different, so different I didn’t recognize it. It was evil. “The jelly in my sister’s eyes would do for a good meal, ...
Feb 6, 2005 -
Re: Favorite TV Shows
Long list The Simpsons CSI Charmed Monk Smallville Lost Everwood One Tree Hill Malcom in the Middle Gilmore Girls Life as we know it Friends I think that's all. What ...
Feb 6, 2005 -
Re: Laurie Faraway.
But the point is, he's out of my reach. I know this because both my best friends have it in for him, and to even admit having a crush on ...
Feb 6, 2005 -
Re: Eternity; Chapter Two
That sounds great. I just think there's a typo or something when you wrote: 'the girl watched him, her face still his her fear . . . ' Either that ...
Feb 5, 2005 -
Re: Dying
I guess you're a christian then? I've also imagined writing to be something like that, though I hope heaven has more in store than just happy thoughts, but I guess ...
Feb 5, 2005 -
Re: Valentine's Day
Hey thanks for the reviews guys. I was kinda destracted when I wrote this and had to go before I could go further. My spelling is horrid when I don't ...
Feb 5, 2005 -
Re: Eternity; Chapter Two
I think that you should try to find other words, because it adds a bit of substance when you describe things like that you know?
Jan 30, 2005 -
Re: Valentine's Day
Valentine's Day. I hate Valentine's day. There's no point to it, no purpose. The only thing it's good for is to show, once again, that no one likes me. It ...
Jan 30, 2005 -
Re: at large
"Where the hell are you?" the irratable voice of his girlfriend half yelled. "Relax baby," he said calmly as he swaggered down the street. He knew he was late, but ...
Jan 30, 2005 -
Re: Orientation Programs in School
Finally! i'm a fully-fledged highschool student, free from the every day termoil senior put innocent little troffels through. Yay!!! \:D/ I've also finally noticed how cute the guys are in ...
Jan 30, 2005
