Willow

Aw, shucks :oops: thanks guys

This is me, in Sun City. You can't actually see it's Sun City coz I cropped it out. It was taken end of last year. This one was taken last ...

All was silent as I stepped into the quaint little house. My feet echoed slightly on the clay floor as I crept towards the wooden stairs. Could it be possible ...

God, I really liked this. It's really good. I don't know what to say. It has this weird muted effect on me, don't really know how to describe it.

Sorry Emma, but I didn't like it that much. Like Sureal said, he writes in simplistic tones. I don't really like his style of writing, although the gore descriptions are ...

Okay, I really don't know what to say. It's interesting and the form is original. If you go on with this thing i'd like to read it. Interesting :D

Thanks Emma :D

"Uh," I said, wondering what to say. "I, um, need my bracelet." A puzzled expression crossed his face, but after a few seconds it cleared. "I haven't had time to ...

I glanced at Bevan, wondering what he was thinking about. I was thinking about the city. As always I wondered what it held that could be so dangerous, so forbidden. ...

Thanks Emma I corrected the typo. Do you think I should post more of this story?

This was great. The descriptions are excellent and as lin night said they draw you in. I would just like to know a bit more about the character, and her ...

Okay, I corrected some things that dreaming_mouse pointed out. :oops: Thanks for the crit everyone!

I think it was great. Your description is very good, and the story is interesting. I think i spotted a few typos, but it could just be me. {rubs eyes ...

A few hours later I still had no idea who had called. My father brushed him off to be some old colleague, but I knew he was lying. The hand ...

I liked it. You write really well. I just didn't understand it that well, and in the second paragraph I didn't know whether they were speaking or thinking or whatever. ...