Willow

I liked it too. You have a great style and you sound very deep. I didn't really understand it that well at first but I caught up. Over all, it's ...

Interesting I just noticed that you repeat things a bit, like her looking at him warily. Try to find a different word for it or something. I really like this ...

Your start is good, but I kinda lost it with the call. Some background info would also be nice. Otherwise, it sounds as though it's up to a good start.

Sarah watched in horror as blood gushed from the wound on her sister’s neck. She lay there, motionless and bleeding. Her clothes were ripped and dirty, her hair in tangles. ...

The place was old to say the least. It was built around the 1920s, long before Madison Palmer graced this earth. The dormers were bleak and plain, nothing distinguishing the ...

Great

A few minutes later I was walking through the empty street. I had walked this route so many times, I could've closed my eyes and leave my feet to do ...

Come dawn I decided to head for the lush greenery in the middle of the island on my own. From what I could see, the others were still asleep. I ...

I just got a new theory. On veritaserum they conspiculate that the hbp doesn't neccesarily have to be a guy, so I thought, what if its Tonks?

"Safe from what?" Kyla asked, distressed. She had never been in any sort of danger before, none that she knew of anyway. The woman just sighed and stared at the ...

Okay, since no one else has posted in a while, I'll go on. Matt was different. Sure he was cool, popular and every girls dream, but the way he thinks ...

I really liked this. There are like two typos or something, but the rest is great. I'd love to know what happens next. :D

Bye CAG, hope you enjoy your new home. We'll miss you :cry:

Mine's not as complicated. My father's Dutch (immigrated when he was small) and my mother is South African born and bred. Although, since almost all white South Africans basically came ...

I don't know who the hbp is gonna be, but I think the major character who's gonna die is Dumbledore. Oh, and Harry is a half blood (it says so ...