My First Book
Hello, this is our first book. It has been written by two people and William Paige is simply our pen name. It is our third year of working on it. Though it is not done we wished to share a potion of it with you.
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The Fall - Chapters 1-4
200 hundred years after the nuclear war that almost ended humanity, life has been moved to the sky.
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The Fall - Chapters 5-7
The trio continues to stuggle with conflicts. While Sange must face drama, Benjamin learns more of the misconduct of the lab workers.
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The Fall - Chapter 16
You don't need the context of the other chapters to edit this excerpt, I am simply looking for reader's immediate reaction. For questions just comment
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The Fall - Chapters 8-9
The story continues (or if your new just a quick review of the actual writing would be lovely)
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The Fall - Chapter 10
Reading previous chapters is recommended but not required I still appreciate feedback without context.
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Chapter 30 - Sange
Nearing the climax, Sange much face her final battle. No need for context, please analyze. No need to hold back, please be honest