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No end!!!!! Why must you do this to me Hawkeh? I was absorbed and then it ended! Anyway... >.> No grammar or punctuation mistakes! And I loved the discription of ...

Hi, Kyllorac! Once again, a perfect story. Amazing! *gives cookehs* And a foxeh! =O I love you for the foxeh *is so not obsessed >.>* This wasn't much of a ...

Awesome story! I love it and I'll be waiting for more :D Other words for golden/gold? Um... Ember, as beautiful and glowing as the Sun? I really have nothing... But, ...

Mwahaha! I've returned and might I say, I enjoyed this chapter :D I like Madison, she seems like a real person in my opinion only maybe you should describe th ...

Wow. That was insanely awesome! Incredible, really! I agree with SheepMonoxide that you captured the kid's thoughts and feelings perfectly and what the adult said is almost exactly what my ...

Awesome! I love this story and it sounds like one I'm writing now although mine takes place in an art school. :D Please, please, please continue this! I'd love if ...