Wildecharlie818

I really liked the subject it was original, creative and interesting. Thanks for posting it. One thing bothered me a lot and that is grammar. Capital letters are of huge ...

The whole poem is a bit confusing, but the sentence structure is pretty good. You need to work on the flow of your poems, this one was far too disjointed. ...

I loved the beginning of the poem but the ending fell kinda flat for me. There was a couple of lines that seemed awkward: "The snowmoblie lerched forward, and so ...

Little Boy’s Laugh The waves gently kissed the sides of the ship; beating out a steady rhythm as the ship slid smoothly through the murky depths of the sea. A ...

Being Imperfection Living, breathing in this world of contamination Seeking, finding, immigration Always dreaming, being, another dimension In this world of stress and tension. This world broken; the

Sicily: Memoir Prologue “He gave you are chance and you went and blew it didn’t you?” “Mother it’s not like that at all!” “Sicily, I’ve had quite enough, you will ...

Suicide Letter Trapped in fears embrace Darkness falls as I descent Tangled thick in dreams of woe Set aside in moments haste I wait I surrender I roam