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I really liked this poem, Ofour. In order to make it flow better, though, I'd highly suggest not capitalizing every line, if at all. It would make it seem more ...

I think you're doing fine. :D Just don't lose TOO many marbles. lol

The first two paragraphs are completely unnecessary. I loved the whole story though! I want to hear more about what happens to them...

Good so far! Seems a little unrealistic, and there's not a big BANG of plot, but I like it! Post more!

I agree, Nate. *applauds* Thanks for taking things into your own hands-it was getting a bit ridiculous, I must admit. Now everyone can chat together again!

That almost made me cry! *wipes away tears* Awesome job! I'm sure it'll get published...I'll sue the editor if it doesn't!

I can't wait to see the PUBLISHED result of Letting Go. I'm going to go reread it! :D Where are you sending it off to? Ach, Livny. Vhat a man! ...

Thanks so much! Wow-I didn't expect this many positive responses! !_! Thanks though for all your suggestions. Cheri>>I took your suggestion and changed it to the present tense. There had ...

Ach, yes, though I tend to do them a wee bit too much meself. Mother Mary, if I could learn to keep my mouth shut, I wouldn't nearly get into ...

Cake? *shoots over* Count me in! That's AWESOME!!!!! I just knew we'd make it in-three cheers for the best writing site EVER!!!! Hoorah!!!!

Ohmygosh, that's CRAZY!!!! It's so...so...different! I love YWS today, and yesterday. Of course, I was here in April '06, and I remember how incredibly slooooow it was and how much ...

Shadow, you know too much about LOTR. You make my head spin! lol

I promise I'll read your work. I'm definitely interested!!! :D

That is friggin' SWEET!!! Nate, you rock. :D

Same here, Sureal. They send me stuff, but I can't use it because I don't have the money to sign up!