Wiggy

I really like this chapter. The only thing I would suggest is, besides a few minor punctuation errors, I would think Edna would be a bit more upset about her ...

ArIIIII! Love the dress, dahling. Love it, love it, LOVE IT! Can I be a princess, too?

My left hand looks like my sister's handwriting when I try to write with it. Kinda lopsided, ya know? I'm totally right-handed. My dexterity with my left hand is practically ...

10/10, simply because I love Phantom of the Opera, which roses and pianos (sp?) remind me of. :D

*shivers and shudders* Ooooo that was creepy! I really liked it though. I think you have a great writing style, and I can't wait to read more of this!

Aero my MAN! *tacklehugs harder than everyone combined* I missed you sooooo much! I'm so glad you're here! Love ya, and have a great summer! Wigsta ;)

I really need to read more of this! *pants* It was awesome! For the British woman, make her dialogue sound a bit more natural. For me, it was forced, but ...

A little repetitive, but I liked! Good job-I really like your reminiscent style. You reflect a lot of my thoughts a lot!

I like #4 best with the rushing water. Water's always been magical for me!

That's amazing! And we're starting our own journal thing? We're going to be pop-u-lar! :D

Good heavens, that was hard to get through! It was pretty funny though, and made for an enjoyable read. Thanks for posting!

Great idea, Nate! I have 5 yellow stars already-yay!

This was...I don't know how to describe it. It was riveting at least, and I really liked your style. I'd say mysterious would be the word to describe it. The ...

This sounded more like an unrefined story than a poem. What was the point? I'm sorry to be so harsh, but this did absolutely nothing for me. Spice it up ...

That creeped me out. Dude, freakiness!!!!!!! I normally hate vampire stories, but this one, since the surprise came at the end, wasn't half bad. Creepy and paranormal. Good job!