Wiggy

5/10...just kinda...meh. Normal.

I don't like I'll remain neutral. :D I can't not like SPEW, well, I can't REALLY like it, since I don't know what it is, but I love the people ...

CCF, good times, good times! You should love CCF also because we're the crazy, critting freaks, and it's got a Russian based tint to it. I love it. :D

10/10!!!!! Anything Russian gets five gold stars in my book. :)

Good. :) But there's still some places that he says "Mommy" and such. I don't think I've ever heard a 12 year old say that! :lol: Tweak a bit more, ...

I'll be doing a full critique of this soon. Stay posted!

This was a really cute poem! I think you need to work on your rhythm a bit-I don't have time for a full crit, stanza by stanza, but I think ...

I don't like to torture characters too much. The nice thing about doing it is that they're not a living person, and you can do whatever you want to them. ...

Hey Tony! This was a really good piece. Fresh, uncliched, and interesting. I was riveted all the through. I liked your concept, though it WAS morbid and so sad! :( ...

I liked this section! Her reaction to Tom seemed a little...I don't know, unrealistic, and very, very rushed. It's kind of, "Oh, you're leaving, fine, I hate you!" Maybe draw ...

Roman Catholic all the way baby! :grin:

JenNA!!!!!!! Happy b-day girl! *throws balloons up in the air and pops them all* What a partay! lol Have an awesome sweet 16!! Thanks for always being there-you're absolutely amazing. ...

Wiggy skips in singing. "It's rainin' men, alleluia, it's rainin'-" She skids to a complete halt, her mouth gaping open. "You...you...you started dancing-without ME?!?" She goes out on the dance ...

6/10, hard to see, and don't really get...

Fondly, Oscar really takes isosceles triangles under death enigmas. Eradicate