Wiggy

For those two lines, you could possibly say: Some say nothing, yet, she wondered if he would speak. This poem was great! I'm glad you added that extra stanza; it ...

ZOMG!!!!!! Page After Page was amazing!!!! I've been wanting that book to own desperately for awhile. Was Chapter good? I'm doing the write thing by reading Building Fiction by Jesse ...

Ooo, do you mean Piano Player? I'm definitely wanting to read this. :)

It's so dang CUTE! I can't wait for more! I have to do this quickly, or else I'd do more in depth. The "dears" from Adam's mom were really annoying. ...

7/10 Bit trite but I still like it!

5/10 Who the heck is Ferris?

I...I don't know. I liked it, but, as Clau said, it was waaaay too jumpy. I felt like I was jerking when I read it! Part of it definitely has ...

For me, this poem seemed more like a blog entry than an actual literary work. Poems (at least from what I've seen) are made to express feelings, a point, etc. ...

I definitely understood the strikethroughs/slashes bits. :D Hilarious, and brilliant as always, Clau!

6/10...I don't really get it, but it's got something with laughing in it, so I like it! :D

As pointed out before, this seemed more like a list to me. I actually quite liked your imagery; it made me feel like a butterfly was unfolding its wings and ...

You know what, this is a really cliched poem, but I actually liked it! You've got a great, heartwarming topic here, but I think your problem is that you wrote ...

10/10 Anything with CCF rox my sox! :D

This poem confused me. Did she commit suicide? That's the impression I got, and it doesn't seem right because her age seemed very young in this poem-around 7, perhaps? You ...

Thank you kitty!!!! I knew there was something not right with that passage! I couldn't for the life of me think of what the phrase was...you rock! All right, let ...