Wiggy

Becoming friends with Jack, StevieWrites4God, Dusky (does party groove), xanthan gum, and so many others. Eagerly awaiting Eloere's (Lucy) blog everyday and then reading it. Having xanthan gum give a ...

Hey Dusky, you rock! lol I joined and I'm still writingluver5-same ol' same ol'. I reaaaaally hope this site comes back soon though! Go YWS! Mary :wink:

Great job! It had kinda weird rhythm, but loved overall! No crit.

Very, very good. I give you a hearty congrats on a master poem!

Um...have to agree with everyone else here. I know you're a great poet, but I'd have to say this wasn't one of your better attempts. It was just too... blunt ...

Thanks everyone for the critiques! I really appreciate it! In regards to the comments about having "dance" twice in each stanza, that was kind of what I had based my ...

Before, I posted a poem that didn't go over so well :x , so I tried my hand at another one, and I hope this showed more emotion. It's actually ...

Soul Dance Dance Dance ‘til your heart erupts out of your chest And foxtrots over the moon: One two three, one two three- Relentlessly seizing your emotions And baring your ...

Hey, nice job! The rhyming scheme jolted me a little, at least with that fifth line added in there, but overall the poem was very well done and flowed very ...

I loved this captured the emotions so well. You have great talent. Need I say more? Mary :wink:

This should definitely be in dramatic poetry, but while it's here I'll put my two cents in. It's a great poem! I really like how you captured the emotion. It ...

Thanks Inertia! After reading over the poem again, it really is dry. I guess I'll just store this in the archives of my memory...thank you soooo much for your advice. ...

First of all, I can definitely tell that you have talent with writing. You have this way of putting sentences together that makes the reader just have to read on. ...

This is a poem I wrote about a year ago, so it might not be as good as other ones I have written. I really would like some feedback on ...

I definitely felt the intensity of the moment, but...didn't get what the poem was about. Normally, a message in a poem speaks through the words, but in this poem it ...