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Wow MH-thanks for that crit! There's way more to come, don't worry. I'm working on this story for a magazine called THEMA and I want to get as many crits ...

Yes, long awaited story is here :grin:. DD has been pestering me to post it, so I did. I personally don't think it's that great (compared to all the other ...

Anthony Simmons trudged through the snow, glancing up on occasion to glare at the Christmas decorations that surrounded him. The blow-up Santas and Rudolphs mocked him with their smiling faces, ...

Thanks Rei. I'll keep that in mind. :D

Thnks snoink! I'll definitely use these tips to my advantage!

Hey everyone-I'm working on my current story Inscription of Love and the descriptions are great, except the dialogue is *drumroll* BORING! I need some tips on interesting dialogue. Anyone care ...

I hate fish, but love fishr! lol Love ur avvie too-andI'm a history fanatic too! lol

^went from speaker of the forum to senior writer-but is really speaker of the forum lol

Y'all are sooo pretty! I might post some pics soon...I don't know...

Chevy and Matt-Aww soo pwetty! Matt I love that dress on you-you look absolutely gorgeous! That color is really pretty! :D

Thanks chevy! That's a good idea for combining lines. Thanks! :D

Thanks Jack-I'll work on it. :D

Monkey, monkey, monkey, and again...monkey.

Sweet...:D

The Firefly’s Glow Do you remember The fireflies that danced Between our hands, Tantalizing us with their glow? How we ran than night, Dashing through the meadow Like tameless spirits, ...