Wiggy

"Don't you go breaking my, don't you go breaking my, don't you go breaking my heart." (from the song-I've had it in my head all day! lol)

Umm, this was a nice poem, but not great. The rhythm was definitely awkward, and I really didn't get the last stanza either. Nice try! Also, if you work on ...

Hey gummy! Great, great poem. I loved the images in it. It created a beautiful picture of daring and love an such. The only problem I had was with these ...

Sounds good. I may try it sometime! :D

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MOOZ!!!! lol So pretty! The pic might be dark, but it ain't that cloudy! :D

Gummy your so pretty!!! But I think you'd look soooo much better if you smile! I really want to see you smile! :D :D :D

Does anyone know of any good magazines this could be submitted to?

I found it at the 101 Top sites for Writers in Writer's Digest. The best magazine EVAR!!!!! :D

DD, I keep promising you I'll crit your work and I never do. So I'm critting this one now! (I promise I'll get to the Chair-it's 12 pages though and ...

On my blog, this weird striped layout keeps showing up. Also, on the chat thing it keeps not letting me post and it goes really slow. I had no problem ...

Wow guys! Thanks so much for all your help! I'm definitely going to use those crits. Expect more soon! Wiggy ;)

This was a really nice piece. Crysi did a great crit, so I won't bother repeating what she said. Romantic fiction can be stupid or great, and this was great ...