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Awesome, CL! I'll post an in depth crit tomorrow as I have to go to bed.

Btw-I love the letter that is handwritten. That is so cool!

There's just a few grammatical errors that I'm sure you can find. Also, try to make your dialogue a little more realistic. It kind of sounds stilted a little (at ...

I think this is one of the best poems I've read of yours, Brad. (No wonder that you won best poet on the site! :D) There's just one minor mistake ...

*ahem* Who's the AI?

Excellent poem as always Liz. I only have a few corrections. humor so phony, I can’t help but laugh Add a comma after laugh. your mask, and was touched by ...

Welcome to everyone! I'm so excited that YWS had it's grand opening and everything! It's sooooo much fun! lol Welcome, welcome all!

You're completely right Addie. Nice policy Nate. Fair and square.

Great job bubbles! I saw this as voted best poem and I went to check it out. You did a really great job on this and I can't think of ...

Not to be mean, but don't get too cocky. Everyone can use a little work. Everyone . Which includes you. And me. And everyone on this site! Heck, this is ...

You guys rock! Congrats! :D

Congrats everyone! :D *does standing ovation*

That was most definitely fun to read! lol But that is about the most random poem I've ever read! *hands Liz the most random poem award*

A beaut Fand! I loved the flowing language. It was kind of long-winded in a way, but you did a very nice job on it. Sorry I can't give a ...

Um, very...interesting. It doesn't make any sense, though. Please clarify?