Wiggy

Wow-this floored me. Great, great job. Awesomeness! :D

It's cute. Simple and sweet. I like I like!

DD *sighs*-I'm stealing your writing talent! *headdesk* It's just not fair how awesome you write! All right, you know how I promised you a crit? Well, if my stupid brain ...

Hey girlie! Welcome aboard the YWS ship! *says in piratey voice* I love your username! Jessebele (sp?) is soooo pretty! I have a cousin named Jessica. :D I'm writingluver5, or ...

All right-keep writing! :D

This wanted to make me cry! *sobs*

Still Dostoyevsky, I'm afraid. So much stuff going on that I can't seem to find time to read! *tear*

Why does everyone always beat me to the crits? :D Everyne said what I wanted to cover. Don't want to repeat them. lol Nice job!

Nice poem. They already covered what I wanted to say! ;D

That's just weird...

Thanks again Jess. See ya round! Wiggy ;)

How...sexy. lol Cute, cute! :D

You rock Dusky. I loved it...but then again I love everything you write. :D

Wooooow. Fishr, you have just become my new best friend! Majorly! OMG I've never had a crit that....good! I didn't realize there could be so much improvement! Wow wow wow....thank ...

This is like...major awesome. I only have two grammar corrections: Add dash after "ship" and comma after "alone." AFter that, and gummy's suggestion, your good to go. This just had ...