Wiggy

Very nice job gummy! Some words like hydrophioc (sp?) were confusing, but you created a feeling (at least for me) of...disgust (I mean organ walls and roadkill? UGH! ;)) You're ...

Hey Zan! I'm Wiggy and I'm really glad you're here! Don't be afraid to post your work-you'll get honest crits on here and no one is gonna chase after you ...

Wuzzup? Give me some fin-noggin-duuude! ^_~ I'm sure you'll like it here. Everyone's awesome and friendly and if you have any questions, I'm here for ya! And to introduce myself, ...

Sorry Nate. I like this one better because there's more on it and there's way too much scrolling on your proposed idea. Of course, you can do what you want, ...

This may sound stupid, but who is she? I've heard of her, but am not familiar with her work. What are some of her books? Some questions (general ones): What ...

I never got into it, but there was this one guy in my class, Robert, who was utterly OBSESSED with them. This was in 4th grade. Ugh...bad memories...lol

Happy day Snoink! Congrats on winning the spam master award of the week! *hands over trophy* ^_~

save your weeds pretty reflection Needs a comma after "weeds." this skin here is parchment this blood here is ink and what rots is in this Xanthan was right. This ...

Will ye be my writing buddy DD? Pwetty please??? ;) Yea! Procrastinating peeps rock! :D

I liked this a lot...nice job Sam. :D

Think about yourself. What flaws do you have? You can incorporate your own flaws into your main character because you best know your own flaws, so you can relate to ...

Comfy doesn't seem to go with the word chair in this poem. Like it's too...homey while the rest of your poem is angsty/angry type tone. It's just kind of a ...

I'm am sooooo with you guys on that. Even though I haven't done much character development, I am really attached to my main character, Fineena, especially. Like there's a lot ...

I think this is seriously going to help for my novel. I'll have to have like a potato or something! :D

until the wind ripped the last embryo to desert wilderness, This line comfused me. Other than that, awesome job! I really liked how this poem penetrated into your emotions. You ...