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Re: What Does YWS Really Stand For?
Yo, Pat fo shizzle! *gangstah pose* I heart Pat Buchanan, but some other possibilities: Yikes, We Stink Yo, Wha Sup? You Will Smile Yummy, Weird Staples!
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here (4)
You look waaay older than 16! You're cute. ;) Love the last pic. XD
Jan 10, 2008 -
Re: Agent or Publisher: who do I contact first?
Agent, most definitely, Amy. It'll save you so much hassle and trouble, and whenever you get it published, trust me, you'll love your agent to bits! So yeah, go with ...
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: [deleted]
Hey! It looks like you're sortofish new to YWS, so welcome to it! Before anyone critiques your story, I'd suggest you use some punctuation and make this a lot longer. ...
Jan 8, 2008 -
Re: If you were an animal, what would you be?
Ooo, hard decision. My favoritest animals are tigers, and I think Siberian tigers are beautiful, so I'd either be one of those or (I think they're called) bangle tigers. I'd ...
Jan 8, 2008 -
Re: Hospital Nativity
Hey guys, I know this is a double post, but jsut wanted to let you know it's been updated. :D Hope to get some more crits! *wink wink*
Jan 2, 2008 -
Re: Hospital Nativity
Razo, you are a dear. :D *huggles* Thanks so much! I'll work on everything, 'specially that "Peggy says, Peggy does" thing. :P Happy New Year, and you would make me ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Hospital Nativity
Hey guys! I can't believe this is only the second story I've posted on here. :shock: I hope you guys like this one. I'd really like to submit this to ...
Dec 29, 2007 -
Re: My first story: Teri's Necklace
I really liked this! I'll come back for a proper crit later, as I have to go to bed. :D Good job!
Dec 29, 2007 -
Re: Jealousy
All right, first off, it'd help if you'd space out your paragraphs. This story was really hard to read because of that reason alone. There's a lot of grammar errors ...
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: Of the Past - Part 1
Ooo, spooky! *shivers* I liked the mysterious tone on this, but as Dono said, I think you could definitely benefit from some description. Your wording was great on this, and ...
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: Possibilities. - One
Hey Lucy! This wasn't too bad. You have the potential for a good storyline, but there are a few things I'd like to point out. First off, your characters were ...
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: Who do YOU think could be published?
Areida is probably my favorite writer on here (though I love the rest of you, too!). Her works have emotion, drama, love, meaning--the whole shebang. I'm always constantly blown away ...
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: Looking For A Partner
Acoustic, you should write your own story. :) Trust me, it's the only way it'll get written right. :D
Dec 27, 2007 -
Re: Wiggy's Writing
It's been *counts* 8 months since I posted on this! *gulp* I've written, rewritten, and generally procrastinated on several things, but I'm getting into the swing again! I've had my ...
Dec 27, 2007
