Wiggy

It's something a lot of people can relate to...nice job! But try to include a little more dialogue. Descriptions great, dialogue bout 6/10. Keep writing!

Awesome job! All I would want to say has been said above...:D

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*applauds with Gal for Bob* Now I know why you won "presents views best for Debate* in YWS Awards, Bob...:D

Welcome, welcome!!!!! I'm sooo glad you're here!!!! You'll grow in your writing ability by leaps and bounds I'm sure! This site is AWESOME, the members ROCK, and the writing's great! ...

First of all, kudos to you. This was one of the best poems I've ever read. *applauds* It was touching, moving, simple, heartfelt, deep. Only one change I would make: ...

I use grand quite a lot because everything is simply, well, grand! :D Life is too short to miss, so why not make it as grand as possible? -Fineena What's ...

I've n'er heard the word before! -Fineena Have you ever been to a wedding?

Thanks man!

Books on Ireland...hehe Go research!

get really attached to my characters. They become like old friends to me.When I have to kill off a character it feels like I am killing one of my friends, ...

Nice start, but nothing special. Guy wants girl, gets her, loses her deal. Also, please work on your grammar. This story was very hard to get through, and I highly ...

Hey triple! I've seen ya round the site already, and I've discovered that you're really friendly and I'm just soooo glad you're here! What type of stuff do you write? ...

Sweet name Dino! Wine is always good...;) I'm really glad you're here!!!! Thanks for coming to join this AWESOME community of writers! I'm sure you'll fit right in. In fact, ...

Hey! You finally worked on me! Even if you only got a few sentences about footprints done...I'm closer to being happy at least! -Anthony Yo! All I can say is- ...