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Re: A Peaceful Morning
I liked this story. I especially liked your phrase "Clashing metal on metal". Otherwise, a few grammar errors, but nopthing else. I think could expand this and work it into ...
Feb 9, 2011 -
Re: The History of Windriders
Hi there! I really loved this, as I too love fantasy worlds and creatures xD. Apart from a few grammar mistakes: where instead of were and there instead of their, ...
Feb 9, 2011 -
Re: Very short but interesting read.
I noticed too, that I didn't think wolves could 'cry'. It was so sad!!! Nero is a lovely name by the way XD. The White wolf ran to his feeble ...
Feb 9, 2011