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Thanks anyway :D. I've been waiting about a month for someone to review! I don't mind about the so, I don't really read and see the link between them, but ...

Hmmm. Alright. I will edit - come and see what you think now!

The dolphin twitched. Dong-mei slid into the water next to it. It shivered and moved a little way away. She swam underneath it. It was a little uncertain. "Shhhh... Hush, ...

I liked this story. I especially liked your phrase "Clashing metal on metal". Otherwise, a few grammar errors, but nopthing else. I think could expand this and work it into ...

Hi there! I really loved this, as I too love fantasy worlds and creatures xD. Apart from a few grammar mistakes: where instead of were and there instead of their, ...

I noticed too, that I didn't think wolves could 'cry'. It was so sad!!! Nero is a lovely name by the way XD. The White wolf ran to his feeble ...

This is the first chapter of 'Carved Stone'. Only a first draft! I lay back on the pallet and eyed the collection of crystals. On every wall, a thousand crystals ...

If you are totally stuck for names, or just need a bit of inspiration, especially in fantasy, try visiting random name generators. Two really cool ones are Seventh Sanctum (makes ...