Whitewings

Granted, but now since school is so exciting, the rest of your life totally sucks. I wish this wish could not be corrupted.

What is rain? But tears of the sky. Coming down in empty streams. Releasing pain to rip the world, Into scattered, shattered pieces. What is the heart? But a broken ...

To start: 1. In the beginning, it's a bit unclear when you say that "I wish the world today was just like you". Who exactly is you? This is because ...

K, let's see: 1. When you're writing in first person, it should not take that long for the name and gender to be introduced. Generally, it should the first thing. ...

hi... I'm new here and my friend told me to yea.. I do some poetry, sci-fi and fantasy... :D