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i think it is good definetly continue writing this

I love this story Lillian its so cute :)

very good and supenseful . You definetly should continue .

I thought this was a really sweet story and I love that you incorporated Bible scripture. It didn't make sense to me until the end . Really lieks it.

Love yout story very interesting can't wait to read more !!!!!

Such a cut e story definitly continue writing this it sounds so sweer . I love romance stories they make me remember special events in my life. :)

Their house sounds really cool. I love hideaways and banana seat bikes Yay! awesome story so far :D

Thanx for the review and comments please read it again cause i have reedited it and i think it sounds alot better . But there are still place i have ...