WhisperInTheWind

Roon has already picked out the errors, so can I mention the good things? One word, beautiful. You're strong and independent in your work. It shows just how awesome you ...

Beautiful! Shows brilliance in a brilliant poet! Simply amazed me - your talent truly did. I loved everything about this piece. No criticism. Take care.

June! Hey I'm excited, so let's cut to the chase! I thought this was a brilliant work - short, and definitely sweet. Nice little poem with a wonderful personal touch. ...

Fabulous! Just an awesome read and sure brings a smile... Keep it up cause you rock XD

Nice! Definite improvement - witty with involving Jack Sparrow, but I gotta tell you I'm a Will Turner fan all the way xD. I loved how you worked this piece ...

Hey! It wasn't long before even I was new at YWS! This is great work by you! I have to say, it shows you have talent and a natural hand ...

Nice! I loved it - simply awesome! Your personal touch highlights your talent and it is obvious you're Pulitzer in the making! I loved the rhythm and the words. Keep ...

Hey there! I think Inkheart is a fabulous series with all the emotions, drama and effort put into it! The whole concept is magical! My favorite character is of course ...

Okay, I’ll have to admit it. There have been plenty of essays written on writer’s block. What it is, how we fight it, a number of subjects to write on ...

:elephant: Irishfire! Nice work there, teamie! That was neat and long and I can see you've put beautiful personal touches to it! I sound like a techer, don't I? The ...

Little Raya... She's only six In months, Not even a year old. And yet, she's won All of our hearts, All of our love She's more precious than gold. I ...

Nice. Short but sweet. You could have done better. Try working on your rhythm, and write more and more poetry. It's just a thought. :D But I like it. It ...

Hey Hannah, Irish, Mazo and I have ended up reviewing the same piece of yours, lolz. Once again, I really really thank you for making me a part of your ...

Hey Irish! As random as this was, I have to say I Loved this!! It was well thought of and the humour was nicely done! Hey I hate em too, ...

A couple of days before I got to see the Half Blood Prince film, Maddie posted this as her status on Facebook : "Oh my gosh, the new Harry Potter ...