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Re: Without Destiny: Prologue
Thanks for the review. I'll make sure to add more in about the characters. Happy writing to you as well.
Jan 9, 2013 -
Re: After the Last Battle Has Been Fought (and Then Perhaps a Little Bit Before That)
Thanks for the review. I guess the hologram should have either been in the story more or not at all; it was originally there to indicate more of Sam's backstory, ...
Jan 7, 2013 -
Re: After the Last Battle Has Been Fought (and Then Perhaps a Little Bit Before That)
Thanks for the review. I'll try to make the setting more evident. I suppose the ending is a bit rushed; I'm not sure how to balance the pacing with the ...
Jan 7, 2013
