Wherethewindgoes

It seems all of my apostrophes have been replaced with "%u2019".

So, I tried to explain the concept of Shifting a bit better. Does that make any more sense?

Thanks for the review! I'll make sure to fix all of that. Also, congratulations on getting 200 reviews!

Thanks for the review! I'll make sure to edit with those things in mind. Also, the prologue actually took place before the story (it's why the world is somewhat post-apocalyptic). ...

How to start a storybook? I haven't actually done one, but I'm pretty sure all you do is go to this link and click the "Start a new topic" button ...

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review! I'll make sure to add in more character development.

If you would like others to participate in this, I would suggest putting it in the storybooks .

Thanks for the review! I'll make sure to edit with those suggestions. I'm not exactly sure why it's bolded; I originally typed this on google docs and when I pasted ...

Thanks for the review!

Well, this isn't letting me edit my post because it says the url is too long, however, I just noticed a few typos in my post, being 1) "structures" at ...

Thanks for the review.

Thanks. The simile is a bit confusing. It's sort of referencing the fact that the village burning caused a war that has gone on since then, making there dust on ...

Thanks for the advice. I'll make sure to take that into account and perhaps add in some more dialogue or backstory.