WhatIsWhy

D: Leaving real soon. I'll posty whatever chapters I get done in the next 2 days on saturday :D

mm I see what you mean about those sentences. editing ahoy!

Chapter Two There was only one hitch in the plan, it seemed, as the three headed out from the castle on horseback. They didn’t know what kind of creature had ...

:D thanks! actually, I think I'll try to finish chapter 2 NOW before my grandparents get here. I can do it. I know I can.

You're welcome! ^^

Very engaging beginning. Makes you want to know who he is exactly. I agree with Adam--you should make the first paragraph less repetative with your use of "the master." "He" ...