WhatIsWhy

I love this story so far! I can't wait to see what the Princess is like. However, there are two things the others missed: dignitaries, prince's and great knights "prince's" ...

Very nice! :D The only thing I'm not sure of is whether Ray is a boy or a girl. You might want to clear that up. Also, the transition from ...

Very intriguing. Made me want to know who the Master is and what he's going to do with Bracken, besides how he became "the Master" in the first place. He ...

Your imagery, especially of the creatures that take Fred, is very good, and you should continue with that as it is. :D I definitely want to know why they took ...