Whales_Rock

Well, with the way your outline was, with the pronouns, it was a bit hard to understand. But it would seem that your MC finds out that her teacher's four ...

:?: Well heres some nice stuff about her. The plot of my story is that she moves to Miami and to a new school. At the school there is an ...

"To be honest, I would scrap it almost entirely and start again." Okay, I will. I'm not getting anything good about it so I'll trash it if its this bad.

ALL IS NOT WHAT IT SEEMS You’re smooth and velvety like a peach On the outside You smile and your eyes twinkle You’re the “one” to hang out with Your ...

Okay, nice! Like your idea, but, to me it needs more structure. Use a thesauraus and replace some word to make them better! You should make it more intense! "It’s ...

You've got a swell idea, you just need to develop it more. Yes, you need to add much more description and make it longer. It just tells, there is no ...

Ohj, my many questions She's scarily good at tae kwon do. Heh Heh! XD I do Tae Kwon Do also What are your favourite species of whales? My favorite is ...

You did, peanutgallery! Thanks, I'll do that!

Lol I have been writing since I was five in Kindergarten. My first book was: Magic Tree House Book number 22: the sea. Its pitiful if you look at it! ...

Thanks! I had a feeling I got the pl english wrong. I'll take your advice

Too bad this movie isn't too well known! Every person my family has reccomended it to has loved it! It came out in 1963 and literally has every comedian of ...

Definitley First! I just CANNOT do second or third. I really need to know what the charachter is doing and feeling and all

OMG i was gonna post this. My friends and I made three pages of alll ours Those Magic Changes in my pants The Tender Trap in my pants Love Bug ...

Okay so here's my Ode to Whaling. Sorry if it's pitifully bad I've never written a poem before. Also sorry if I got my old English wrong! An “ode” to ...

Well, to start it was kind of confusing for me. This part here: Why hello there "I'm death, nice to meet you Oh your colourful hair I like colours Colourful ...