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I like it :) I don't think the ending is weak, it rounds the whole poem off quite well. It is a little daunting to see so many long lines ...

Ello. I agree with heffa, this is quite captivating. The whole slumberland idea still lacks a bit of sense, but I suppose that depends on who's reading it. Switching between ...

Another new person, hiya! I like the idea, I'm curios as to what the link is. I think it would be better if you copy and pasted into a post ...