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Re: Death's Reign: Chapter I
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Apr 8, 2016
Wow, this is amazing prose. The style is pretty down-to-earth but also fairly sophisticated, and the imagery is quite vivid. The plot is interesting, I want to see what "she ... -
Re: Elysium - Prologue
OK, I'm kind of confused. He stabs the woman, but then thinks about saving her right after? She's already been stabbed, so she'd probably die even if she didn't fall ...
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Re: Elysium - Prologue
OK, I'm kind of confused. He stabs the woman, but then thinks about saving her right after? She's already been stabbed, so she'd probably die even if she didn't fall ...
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Re: Acquainted With the Night
No, I only speak English and German, although I'm acquainted with many others to varying extents. I made the group though and I'll be glad to help people with their ...
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Re: Color!
Oh, that context makes sense.
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Acquainted With the Night
You're welcome. I think I'll go make a club for foreign language help or something.
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Re: Color!
I don't really get it. Some woman's husband doesn't want her to wear makeup, but she decided to anyways. What's the story written for? Is it written to convey symbolism, ...
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Re: Victory
Thanks! This is the first story I've finished in a while. I used to be like "writing is hard and I don't have inspiration" so I haven't practiced much but ...
Apr 7, 2016
