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Re: Elysium - Prologue
OK, I'm kind of confused. He stabs the woman, but then thinks about saving her right after? She's already been stabbed, so she'd probably die even if she didn't fall ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: A Day In Our World
This poem completely just comes across as complaining in rhyme form to me. Poetry doesn't just happen from line to line, but within the lines. If you go read some ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Acquainted With the Night
Well, I have a couple of things to say about this. One, your German is wrong. You don't put spaces in compound words in German, and certain elements appear with ...
Apr 8, 2016
