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Re: Reality is a Sadist
Ahhh, thank you, @lliyah! A lot of thinking has divided the collection and what poem will go in each section. I love ghosts as memories; it's such a fascinating concept ...
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Re: Truth or Dare
Awkward compliment? I’d have to say the majority of flirtatious compliments I receive turn out ridiculously awkward. I was complaining about how I wanted to be six feet tall, and ...
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Re: Best Bird?
Ravens and crows are the best birbs. I love my corvid siblings.
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Re: broken and contrite
The first thought that I have is that I am in love. The instrumental is so sombre and peaceful, like a movie flashback. Excellent delivery of the lines "your secrets ...
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Re: finding (and creating) avant-garde poems
Oh, wow . That ending came out of nowhere, and I love it! At first, the poem gave me a romantic circus vibe. A Rewrite the Stars vibe, almost. But ...
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Re: 2022 Badge Information
Hello! I'm just going to start dumping my stats here. Thread: Reality is a Sadist Comments: 1. Through the Thistles 2. Late Night Thoughts 3. Dream Jars (and other storied ...
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Re: Wandering Minds
This is an interesting poem. At first, I was worried it was going in a completely different direction, and perhaps it is; it's hard to tell in a good way, ...
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Re: Truth or Dare
@MailicedeNamedy hmmm.... truth.
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Re: pink blossoms i scatter become poems
Hey, Rida! Salvador Dali's Persistance of a Memory is an inspiring piece, and I'm excited to see another poet's perspective! The repetition of the line "who's to say ghosts aren't ...
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Re: These Violent Delights
Hello, Elinor! This poem captures the bittersweet of growing up and seeing memories in hindsight. It's almost saccharine, a particular type of rose-coloured glasses memory you try your best to ...
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Re: Dream Jars (and other storied places)
Hey, Lim! Your second poem, Sunset Corridor, is so peaceful. It feels warm to me, like I'm wandering down that corridor you describe and watching the sunset. Your imagery does ...
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Re: Through the Thistles
Hello, Rook! I must say, I'm absolutely in love with the powerful imagery you've written. That ending? Amazing. It's a powerful form of gore that catches you off guard. Honestly, ...
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Re: Late Night Thoughts
Wow! What a lovely little poem. Especially with that strong opening. Nicely done.
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Re: Reality is a Sadist
What if the King Thinks Themself an Idol What if the king thinks themself an idol? That their throne is spun with lies? Does that tarnish the silver in their ...
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Re: Reality is a Sadist
Ghost of Pitiful Memories There is a ghost on my roof It wanders in circles throughout the night Chains scraping over roof tiles Dizzying whispers sneaking through my window There ...
Mar 30, 2022
