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Re: A girl called February
Ooh, this is an interesting poem! The idea of cotton floss that tastes bitter instead of sweet to keep you grounded. I have to ask, though, what inspired your line ...
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Re: Origami Hearts Shaped like Poetry
It's Only a Lifetime, Don't Refuse Inspired by EllieMae ’s guess “Heart Fraud” Everyone wants love, and I am just not special, but you seem to be. I give you ...
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Re: Heart Fragments in Picture Frames
Learning New Things (even when they hurt) I have (handprints on) my forearms, (They sting) and I can(not) handle it, I spend hours (tracing their shape, aching and wincing and ...
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Re: Heart Fragments in Picture Frames
Thank you
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Re: Origami Hearts Shaped like Poetry
Thank you, @Ventomology! It was such fun to write. @Rose, I’m honored to have inspired you! ^^ I’m sure your poetry will turn out great :3
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Re: The Twelve Muses
I love this poem! It really shows how the heartbreak of the position Hera is in, unable to escape her husband, but almost entirely unloved. Wonderful job!
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Re: A girl called February
What a cute poem! I love using strange metaphors to tell a story, and using chocolate frosting as a symbol for positivity definitely fits the bill. This poem is a ...
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Re: Origami Hearts Shaped like Poetry
Recipe for Disaster Inspired by Snoink ’s guess “Heart Fragments in Pickle Jars” Ingredients: 12 hard-boiled months together 2/3 cup loving you 4 teaspoons heart fragment relish 2 teaspoons fres
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Re: Heart Fragments in Picture Frames
Ahh, thank you
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Re: Heart Fragments in Picture Frames
Future Goals I hear the way he treats you. It's hard not to, really, Yelling and screams echo through this house, sink into the foundation, I don't know if I ...
Apr 2, 2024 - Re: on code and conlangs Apr 2, 2024
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Re: on code and conlangs
Oof. Relate to the Mock Trial lost >.> But as Lim said, it's a very unique take on rainbows, taking it out of its usual "treasure at the end" perspective. ...
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Re: A girl called February
Looking for replacements In “Sit Still Look Pretties” These lines. Phenomenal. I love them. This whole poem is so good.
Apr 1, 2024 -
Re: The Sheer Audacity of Refusing to Give Up
Ooh, I love tankas! It's so impressive to see how you made your message clear despite the syllable count
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Re: Origami Hearts Shaped like Poetry
Ahh, thank you, Mint
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