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Re: April Madness 2024
Recipe for Disaster (edited from the one in my NaPo thread) Ingredients: 12 hard-boiled months together 2/3 cup loving you 4 teaspoons heart fragment relish 2 teaspoons freshly bottled tears ...
Apr 5, 2024 -
Re: a poem in a pot
Hey, Rose! I really adore the last line of El Mundo en un Vaso about holding the world together. It was such a clever twist ^^
Apr 5, 2024 -
Re: Sometimes I use my imagination, to make myself happy.
Hey Coffeewriter! Great job with your poems so far. Your second invokes a lot of feeling and desperation due to the usage of repetition. I can’t wait to see the ...
Apr 5, 2024 -
Re: The Neapolitan Games (Weekly NaPo Mini Challenges)
Week One Strawberry Challenge: Tend to the Garden for the words gurgle and crack. Vanilla Challenge: Charred Hearts and Crumbling Walls for the imagery of fire.
Apr 4, 2024 -
Re: Origami Hearts Shaped like Poetry
Charred Hearts and Crumbling Walls Inspired by starbean ’s guess “Heart Fragments in Picture Flames” Our precious kingdom is on fire, the ash and embers paint our sky a gothic ...
Apr 4, 2024 -
Re: Heart Fragments in Picture Frames
Tend to the Garden You put soil in my lungs. Black, cakey, dotted with earthworms, filling my airways, packed in tight. You gave me packets of seeds, and I swallow ...
Apr 4, 2024 -
Re: A girl called February
Ooh, this is an interesting poem! The idea of cotton floss that tastes bitter instead of sweet to keep you grounded. I have to ask, though, what inspired your line ...
Apr 4, 2024 -
Re: Origami Hearts Shaped like Poetry
It's Only a Lifetime, Don't Refuse Inspired by EllieMae ’s guess “Heart Fraud” Everyone wants love, and I am just not special, but you seem to be. I give you ...
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: Heart Fragments in Picture Frames
Learning New Things (even when they hurt) I have (handprints on) my forearms, (They sting) and I can(not) handle it, I spend hours (tracing their shape, aching and wincing and ...
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: Heart Fragments in Picture Frames
Thank you
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: Origami Hearts Shaped like Poetry
Thank you, @Ventomology! It was such fun to write. @Rose, I’m honored to have inspired you! ^^ I’m sure your poetry will turn out great :3
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: The Twelve Muses
I love this poem! It really shows how the heartbreak of the position Hera is in, unable to escape her husband, but almost entirely unloved. Wonderful job!
Apr 2, 2024 -
Re: A girl called February
What a cute poem! I love using strange metaphors to tell a story, and using chocolate frosting as a symbol for positivity definitely fits the bill. This poem is a ...
Apr 2, 2024 -
Re: Origami Hearts Shaped like Poetry
Recipe for Disaster Inspired by Snoink ’s guess “Heart Fragments in Pickle Jars” Ingredients: 12 hard-boiled months together 2/3 cup loving you 4 teaspoons heart fragment relish 2 teaspoons fres
Apr 2, 2024 -
Re: Heart Fragments in Picture Frames
Ahh, thank you
Apr 2, 2024