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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Guardians: Chapter 1 The Begining

    Ohhh, this is good. I can't wait for more! :) Please update me on my wall when you've updated your story! :)

    Oct 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Nuclear War

    This is okay, however, I feel as though it's a little short, and it doesn't really feel that meaningful. I guess that nuclear war isn't that meaningful in general, but ...

    Oct 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Aftermath Chapter 2

    Okay, don't get me wrong, I love your story that you are presenting to us. However, I found many grammatical errors and contredicting descriptions. Just read the first paragraph again. ...

    Oct 23, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Hells Angel

    I can't say anything, but WOW! I wish I was as good a writer as you! Oh my god, wow! That was absolutely brilliant! It reminded my of reading a ...

    Oct 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: That's What Love Is

    I think your poems good. :) There were some things that bugged me about it though. One was that is seemed as though the stanza were too short. Life, before ...

    Oct 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Gleaning

    I don't know what to say. This is a phenominal poem you've written here. :) I think it's perfect. Wow! You've written something great here. :) I like your wording, ...

    Oct 13, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Degeneration One Prologue

    This is awesome!!! I can't wait to read more! I'm assuming this is a Fallout fan fiction, which was really good and well written. If it's not, then that would ...

    Aug 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: In my world

    CCCCCOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLL!!!!!! Sorry. :) I completely understand where your coming from, and am happy to have found someone who thinks the same way I do. :D

    Jul 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Everlasting War: Pre-Recorded Times Chapter 2

    I'm liking your series. I can't wait to read more. I love the fact each have powers. However, do you mind if I ask, what is up with the cat-eared ...

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Summer Movie Reviews

    Today, I'm going to do a review on the latest Transformers movie, the third one released. The movie gives me mixed feelings. Let me tell you though, it is epic, ...

    Jul 12, 2011


The blood jet is poetry and there is no stopping it.
— Sylvia Plath