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Re: My Frozen Blood-Chapter One
I LOVED this chapter! I really liked how you specifically told the reader what kind of tea Robert was drinking. And I hope the next chapter is up soon so ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: Breaking Dawn
I loved it! It's a nice endding to the Twilight saga. Seeing Bella as a vampire was awsome and she had a cool power. I liked how Jake told his ...
Sep 27, 2008 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
The worst book I've ever read was...The Giver. I hated how it left the endding so open and how it doesn't even tell you if they make it to another ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: A Pessimist/ And other poems.
It's an interesting poem, but it doesn't really tell what it's about clearly. I get that it's about someone going away and you don't want that to happen and sort ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1:Cousins?
It was really good as a whole. I thought the twins were a little off and Tamaki is a little more dramatic about things ususally, but you came close enough ...
May 3, 2008
