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Re: Character descriptions for first person
Thanks to all of you for the helpful advice! ^_^
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: Do you carry a notebook with you?
I usually keep a college ruled notebook with me almost all the time. It's pretty orginization...most of the time. If I don't have one with me though and a idea ...
May 31, 2008 -
Re: Character descriptions for first person
Okay, I am currently writting a story in first person and I'm not sure how describ a person in first person. I don't usually write in first person so I ...
May 31, 2008 -
Re: Ideas & Inspirations
The place I'm at helps a lot with finding the inspiration for my stories and then I just stare at my black note book, computer screen word document and wait ...
May 31, 2008 -
Re: Said?
It is past tense and don't wory about it. I get confused on tenses all the time and it drives my cousin crazy.
May 31, 2008 -
Re: A Dangerous Night Chap.2
Thanks for your helpful suggestions!
May 25, 2008 -
Re: A Dangerous Night Chap.2
A Dangerous Night Chapter two Boston “There, you’re in Boston. Now get the hell out of my car!” Shang snarled at Zeke as he parked his teal Toyota Prius out ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: A Dangerous Night Chap.1
Thanks for all your acvice! it really helps me understand what I need to do to make the story better. To answer your question mikedb1492 shanghai is the name of ...
May 4, 2008 -
Re: A Dangerous Night Chap.1
A Dangerous Night Chapter one The moon seemed silver against the onyx sky. Fog walked slowly through the small town, so thick you could cut it with a knife. It ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: A Pessimist/ And other poems.
It's an interesting poem, but it doesn't really tell what it's about clearly. I get that it's about someone going away and you don't want that to happen and sort ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Pirates
Don't make his father captain, that's been over used like an old cleaning rag. I say maybe once they board the pirate ship they're maybe put in the brig for ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1:Cousins?
It was really good as a whole. I thought the twins were a little off and Tamaki is a little more dramatic about things ususally, but you came close enough ...
May 3, 2008
