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...he knew that there was more to Caitlin than he currently knew

Thank you all of you! This really helped me and I will try out these ideas. Once again thanks to you all ^_^

Practicaully all my stories there is almost all ways two or more people who hate each other. They're all ways getting into arguements and physical fights. Now, how do I ...

I LOVED this chapter! I really liked how you specifically told the reader what kind of tea Robert was drinking. And I hope the next chapter is up soon so ...

Everyone's really pointed out everything that needed work, so there's not much I can tell you. Overall I really liked the story. I loved the prologue! I really look forward ...

Chapter four: The Price of Secrets are Taken in Payment Fading golden rays filtered through thick fluffy clouds, illuminating the sky a pinky-orange color. Waves crashed along the sandy shore, ...

False Child of Shinku Book one Chapter two: One spark starts it all The sky glowed brilliantly orange as the yellow sun rose above the golden tree tops of the ...

I loved it! It's a nice endding to the Twilight saga. Seeing Bella as a vampire was awsome and she had a cool power. I liked how Jake told his ...

My opinion doesn't really matter since you'll be making your own decision about weather to restart or not, but I'll give you my two cents anyways. When that happens to ...

Thanks for you review ^_^ I'll be sure to PM you as well when I post the next chapter. I'll definitley critique your first post.

The worst book I've ever read was...The Giver. I hated how it left the endding so open and how it doesn't even tell you if they make it to another ...

Thanks for the review! I'm glad I was able to surprise you ^_^ I will definitely PM you when I post more of the chapters.

False Child of Shinku Book one Chapter one: It’s just the beginning The rain came down hard as if it was being pulled down by an unknown force. The wind ...

A Dangerous Night Chapter three: Death The New York City air was smoggy and humid as almost black clouds threatened to storm. The city was roaring with life. Cars honked, ...

Thanks for your advice! It's really helpful ^_^