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Re: Pyrroella
The words echo in my ears, refusing to leave yet I couldn’t believe them. No, it wasn’t true-it couldn’t be. Mother would never do that. Phoebe was silent at first ...
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Re: For Her
I this that your writing is very good. I like your style, its easy to read. But it feels like I'm reading a random part of book in the middle ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: The Carpenter and the Clown - For the Big Random Contest
Wow. That was really funny. My sister would really appreciate the clown being beat up. She literally has clorophobia. It hilarious:) The only thing i would suggest is maybe have ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Butterfly
Pretty. I love the colors!! and the design. It looks kinda realistic:)
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Moonlight
This is so pretty! I love the image it brings and you did good rhyming. I suck at that:/
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Stranger
That was awesome. I had abosolutely no idea what it was leading to then when I came to the end I just started laughing, It was such an intense poem ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Simplicity
I loved this! Good job:) I really understand what the speaker is saying. A baby's simplicity and innocence is truly beautiful.
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: The Birth of a Vampire
I really liked this. I love your writing style. It's smooth but exciting and easy to follow. I only have a couple things to critique. First is the tense. In ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: The singing game
I like all Animal s - Ke$ha What do you see?
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Red Stilettos(Title Pending) Chapter 1- Council
First Off, I really like your writing voice and the plot. I think you could go very far with it. I like the idea of a vampire jury. I do ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: The singing game
I'd say "What the hell?" -Avril lavigne You are in a room with chuck Norris and a dishwasher. What do you do?
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: The singing game
A Monster - Paramore If you could go anywhere where would it be?
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: The singing game
Tim Mcgraw -Taylor swift What's your favorite snack??
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Hey, I'm new and would love to know more people on here:)
Oh, the book I'm working on is a spin on Cinderella, the REAL story. It's told from the perspective of one of the step sisters. In it the way Cinderella ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Hey, I'm new and would love to know more people on here:)
Hey, thanks guys:) @ MiRaCLeS yeah i did read those books! Jace is amazing:) But i just thought the name sounded really cool and writerish:) Yeah I remeber something about ...
Jun 25, 2011
