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Re: Clarity in the Making Day 1
I really loved this! You are a very good writer. the only thing I had a problem with was it was kinda hard to read because there wernt breaks so ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: the Tree of Ungit [two paragraphs of the beginning]
Wow. That is a very good begining and drew me in right away. I dont normally read fantasy writings but your is really interesting so far. I would really love ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Outspoken Rain
Your book is really good so far! I like how you write and think you have good potential for story writing! I hope you will PM me when you have ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: The Perfect Storm Chapter 1 & 2
Prologue Ten year old Marshall Tucker was on his way home after being at his friends house all day. As he peddled up on his bike he has ready to ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever.
I love it! I was drawn in from the beginning. Its got a really good plot so far and I can already see some of whats going to happen! There ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Untitled chapter 1
This is my first time posting something on here so I hope yall like it! sorry about all the grammar mistakes ill go back and fix those later. Enjoy! I ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart - Ch-1(Olivia)
Wow I loved chapter 1 just as much as I loved the prologue. In the prologue I kinda felt bad for Amanda, but after reading chapter one I feel as ...
Mar 31, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart-Prologue (REVISED)
Wow! That was truly amazing! You have a true passion for writing and you can see it in your work. I was hooked by the end of the second paragraph! ...
Mar 19, 2010 -
Re: Story Currently Untitled-Chapter 1
I really like your work. I found it a little confusing at first since I didn't know what it was about but by the end I think I got it. ...
Mar 19, 2010 -
Re: first chapter...
Your book is very good. It pulled me in and I couldn't stop reading. There are a few spelling errors and some grammatical errors but I was so into the ...
Mar 19, 2010 -
Re: All I Want Is A Smile
I really love your book! i think you have something good going. keep at it, i look forward to reading more! there were a few grammatical errors but nothing really ...
Mar 19, 2010
