WarriorOfTheBrimstone

I really liked this poem, it was akward in a couple of spots with the rhyming but overall very good. The only major issue I had with it was a ...

From my narrow pane of vision, Through a shade of tinted rose I looked upon our fated path As a righteous dream imposed. We have strayed from the asphalt, To ...

Arrogance blooms with much to spare As I stand before the crooked lair Of mortal men so viciously vile That even snakes divert their glare. Their perverse smiles sicken me ...

This poem is a bout GOLF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I very much liked this poem, it had a lot of very interesing imagery and I thought the rhyming couplets set off a whismical apect of the topic that was ...

There is a man, you no him no doubt That stands and waggled his club about Wars are won and wars are lost Forests are painted green with moss Tyrants ...

I really liked the was a very complelling point of view. I'm not sure I like the two line couplets but there are other problems besides that. First of all, ...

It seems like you have some talent as a writer, but this poem does not do you justice. I thought some imagery was very good but it was erratic at ...

The night was still, but my heart raced A constant pounding through my veins. There in that harsh and lifeless place Is where love had lived and blood had stained. ...

God’s mind begot our Gospel truths But by men they were transcribed Human hands have formed the proof Of the doctrine of the skies We open our hearts to receive ...

I strongly disagree with the above critic because I believe the constant repetition is meant to strongly convey one point and I think it does so very effectively. work on ...

I didn't really like the imagery and alot of the meaning was a little scewed the rhymimng pattern was annoying after a while but oerall it was solid and u ...

i approach it like it should bee approached, with a great deal of respect for the art, i wont put words on paper that are cliche, vaugue or meaningless because ...

The lilting brook whispers softly To the mist covered terrain “Nothing will stagnate here again Nor will it ever be the same.” The hills boom their rotund chords And stand ...

A lore bearing under-earth employs my twin unnamed As Satan’s standard-bearer His yet un-vituperated Cane When the battle cry was sounded And the siren song was sung The naive among ...