WarriorOfTheBrimstone

Oh Because You never tried To bow my will or break my pride And nothing of the cave man made You want to keep me half afraid. Never with a ...

Thank You all so much for all the praise and I hope to bring you better work in the future! Thanks again!

Oh gentle winds 'neath moonlit skies, Do not you hear my heartfelt cries? Below the branches, here about, Do not you sense my fear and doubt? Side glistening rivers, sparkling ...

Can an angel be of leather hide? Or does divine lend exclusive path? Why shan't an angel brave the raging tide? And feel poverty's purgatory wrath. To so asses the ...

As I was reading this poem, I wasn't sold on it. For most of it, I wasn't sure what you were trying to portray but then the ending came and. ...

As I was reading this poem, I wasn't sold on it. For most of it, I wasn't sure what you were trying to portray but then the ending came and. ...

I loved this, I could feel the inspiration and as I was reading it, I just got filled with emotion. I'm usually pretty tough but this song was beautiful, I ...

5 minutes to go Im going home When the bell rings I am leaving Because if I stay I just might change my mind You are the reason I'm moving ...

Not so sure I'm sold on this poem. It seems pretty sloppy to me, there wasn't any puncuation or capitilization, which just makes it LOOK bad. No matter how good ...

thank you for the review! i played this song with my band and it went over very well. Thank you again for the review

By a sea without a shore I meant that it will be a grief that will have no end for me because I loved her with all my heart and ...

This truth is like a sea that has no shore, Chaos infinite in heart and mind: That you should once have been, and are no more. To me you are ...

The water from the river Styx, May consume the virgin land. But the flesh of a love fomerly latent Will sheild me from Atropo's hand With a body soft enough ...

In a little town north of nowhere Where wind always blows cold Everyone stands and stops and stares And watches Kelly's soul be sold She is trying to find direction ...

I liked this poem quite a bit. I think it has the potenial to be a great poem if you extended it more. The emotions need to be fleshed out ...