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Re: Starting an essay
Ok to the point! Our teacher decided to give a you know what and actually gave us a guide sheet to write our essay! It basically outlines how to get ...
Feb 21, 2008 -
Re: Sub Rosa
I love this poem, I said I came to YWS improve and it's pieces like this that really help. I don't do much poetry anymore (Trying to catch up on ...
Jan 5, 2008 -
Re: Indented sections
Well being a geek is never a bad thing ;) It's what separates the dreamers that have genuine possibilities from those who don't :P Oh, and thank you several times, ...
Jan 5, 2008 -
Re: Indented sections
What are indented sections in writing? AND Why/when do you use them?
Jan 5, 2008 -
Re: RIP
MY interpretation of the meaning is there, someone who's potential world is ruined by the carelessnes of someone else, and as for the guy who is intrigued by how the ...
Dec 12, 2007 -
Re: English Language GCSE Coursework
Everyone wants an A*, right? Well part of the criteria reads: "Organisational skill and originality and displays control of extended linguistic and structural devices." I shall make an assumption that
Dec 12, 2007 -
Re: Writing about confrontation
Perfect sense. Thje problem I'm having is when I've left the story I forget to re-read it. Also, I'm limitted to two pages and everything had to either happen at ...
Dec 2, 2007 -
Re: Writing about confrontation
Well quite simplisticly, my main character is about to storm into her fathers room whilst he's having sex. She finds out from the father's sexual companion that this affair is ...
Dec 2, 2007 -
Re: Horace the Dragon or Bartemius the Monkey?
Dragons are too cliche! GO BARTY!
Nov 27, 2007 -
Re: Sabriel
Wait one sec...I'll get it from my room... Ok, you know how it ends with her death? Well, she's in Death, and she meets all the other Abhorsens. They tell ...
Nov 25, 2007 -
Re: Sabriel
Dang, I just returned Sabriel to my Library and forgot to read the epilogue... Can anyone tell me what happened in the epilogue,; else I'll have to trek to the ...
Nov 19, 2007 -
Re: Unfulfilled
Sorry quick response, in a hurry but thanks both of you, especially Evangelina for the indepth review i'll make some edits after school. THANKS! Editted version: Unfulfilled Why is it ...
Sep 27, 2007 -
Re: A Dying Diction
I did like it, but I think when read the fact that it is one sentence made me open my mouth and go "Huh?" I had to read it a ...
Sep 26, 2007 -
Re: Summer of First Love
For something like this, I think you deserve a bow from the Queen. :lol: This is as inevitable As the sun rises in the east. You see I have to ...
Sep 26, 2007 -
Re: Unfulfilled
Crit is welcome, but please also crit my other work it has no replies... Unfulfilled Why is it that when we know the name of love, we conceal it; deceive ...
Sep 26, 2007
